Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled ‘Footprints’ by Sorji is Editing the Words on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 A snowflake fell on the sidewalk. Then another landed in the grass. Some landed on the car and on the branches of the tree in the front yard. I know because I had been watching when […]
Today we have a piece titled ‘Bitter’ by Swordpen on Writing.com Paragraph 1&2 “Here ya go pal.” The bartender wore a smug grin as he placed the Old Fashioned in front of me with all the poise of a drunken baboon. The kid was young, might not even be old enough to drink the swill he’s […]
Blog 30 Today, we have a recurring author, Octavius from Writing.com with a piece titled ‘Karma.’ It’s been six months since Evin transferred here for work. He’s been working hard to collect enough credits for a date at the resort on Tower 7. We’ve discussed opening paragraphs before and this is a good opportunity to […]
Today we have a piece titled ‘Shirley Suspicious’ by Abaru on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 I woke up on a hospital bed with a doctor to my left and a couple of people with familiar faces to my right. My vision was hazy. My eyes were wet, and my lips were dry. One of the familiar […]
Hello everybody, today we have a piece from K.D.Miller on Writing.com titled ‘Skeletons in the Attic.’ Paragraph 1 For as long as I could remember, I lived a normal, boring life on an old farmhouse with my elderly Papi, and his three brothers. Papi was the youngest and about fifty when I was born. I […]
Hello everybody, today we have a piece from BXC on Writing.com titled “Underneath the Rubble”. Paragraph 1/2 Terror. That was the only thing five-year-old Carson Krot could feel as he lay trapped underneath the rubble of the destroyed home, his left eye the single patch of skin left uncovered by dirt and stone. Barely able […]
Today we have a piece from Cat Caroll on Writing.com The moon is rising, her divine light shining down on the Baroque Moszna castle before me. Its ninety-nine spires attempting to rip the moon apart. I smirk. Home is where the heart is. It’s been a long time coming. But I’m ready. Paragraph 1 This […]