Blog #37 The Wrong Destiny

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Hello everybody, Today we have a piece from Roesavlon on DeviantArt with a piece titled The Wrong Destiny. I imagine it’s the untold history of how the whole of Delphi got drunk and went on a crazy bender through Greece. Paragraph 1 If you’re reading this now, that means my plan has worked. In that case, […]

Review #11 Hidden Planet

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#36 The Journey of a Hero

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Blog 36 Today we have a piece titled The Journey of a Hero by Officialkat14. (Though there are some shenanigans afoot as this was uploaded to a friend’s account.) Paragraph 1 No matter where you look, you always see the same types of people. You have the outcasts, the wealthy, the peacemakers, the peacebreakers, and the in-between, who […]

#35 Foresight

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Hello everybody, today we have a piece from Myles Abroad on Writing.com. It is titled Foresight, and will no doubt include floating glass spheres of mystical origin. Paragraph 1 Oven-like heat saturated each breath. My eyes fluttered open, unease nagging until Mac’s steady, sleeping rhythm soothed me. Dawn light pooled shadows on his gaunt, worry-lined face […]

Review #10 “Beggar’s Rebellion”

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#34 One foot forward

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Blog 34 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled One foot Forward by Keaton Cooper. A remote corner on the private Arcadia Island, north of the San Juans, is host to a most peculiar facility–a place whose true purpose remains largely unknown to locals on surrounding islands and authorities alike. It is here our sordid tale […]

Review #9 The Ozimord Project

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#33 The Black Rose

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Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled Black Rose by Istvan Janos on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 “We interrupt this program with breaking news. There has been another homicide on the east side of Grand Rapids. Police say it’s probably another link in the chain of homicides that occurred previously over the past week. As soon as […]

Review #5 Sacrifice

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Review #8 Stealing the Light

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#32 Footprints

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Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled ‘Footprints’ by Sorji is Editing the Words on Writing.com.  Paragraph 1 A snowflake fell on the sidewalk. Then another landed in the grass. Some landed on the car and on the branches of the tree in the front yard. I know because I had been watching when […]

#31 Bitter

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Today we have a piece titled ‘Bitter’ by Swordpen on Writing.com Paragraph 1&2 “Here ya go pal.”  The bartender wore a smug grin as he placed the Old Fashioned in front of me with all the poise of a drunken baboon. The kid was young, might not even be old enough to drink the swill he’s […]

Review #7 Children of the Dead City

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#30 Karma

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Blog 30 Today, we have a recurring author, Octavius from Writing.com with a piece titled ‘Karma.’ It’s been six months since Evin transferred here for work. He’s been working hard to collect enough credits for a date at the resort on Tower 7. We’ve discussed opening paragraphs before and this is a good opportunity to […]

#29 Shirley Suspicious

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Today we have a piece titled ‘Shirley Suspicious’ by Abaru on Writing.com.  Paragraph 1 I woke up on a hospital bed with a doctor to my left and a couple of people with familiar faces to my right. My vision was hazy. My eyes were wet, and my lips were dry. One of the familiar […]