#32 Footprints
Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled ‘Footprints’ by Sorji is Editing the Words on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 A snowflake fell on the sidewalk. Then another landed in the grass. Some landed on the car and on the branches of the tree in the front yard. I know because I had been watching when […]
#31 Bitter
Today we have a piece titled ‘Bitter’ by Swordpen on Writing.com Paragraph 1&2 “Here ya go pal.” The bartender wore a smug grin as he placed the Old Fashioned in front of me with all the poise of a drunken baboon. The kid was young, might not even be old enough to drink the swill he’s […]
Review #7 Children of the Dead City
#30 Karma
Blog 30 Today, we have a recurring author, Octavius from Writing.com with a piece titled ‘Karma.’ It’s been six months since Evin transferred here for work. He’s been working hard to collect enough credits for a date at the resort on Tower 7. We’ve discussed opening paragraphs before and this is a good opportunity to […]
#29 Shirley Suspicious
Today we have a piece titled ‘Shirley Suspicious’ by Abaru on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 I woke up on a hospital bed with a doctor to my left and a couple of people with familiar faces to my right. My vision was hazy. My eyes were wet, and my lips were dry. One of the familiar […]
Review 6: The Wake-Up
#28 Skeleton in the Attic
Hello everybody, today we have a piece from K.D.Miller on Writing.com titled ‘Skeletons in the Attic.’ Paragraph 1 For as long as I could remember, I lived a normal, boring life on an old farmhouse with my elderly Papi, and his three brothers. Papi was the youngest and about fifty when I was born. I […]
#27 Underneath the Rubble
Hello everybody, today we have a piece from BXC on Writing.com titled “Underneath the Rubble”. Paragraph 1/2 Terror. That was the only thing five-year-old Carson Krot could feel as he lay trapped underneath the rubble of the destroyed home, his left eye the single patch of skin left uncovered by dirt and stone. Barely able […]
Review #4 Kakorrhaphiphobia
#26 The Clock
Today we have a piece from Cat Caroll on Writing.com The moon is rising, her divine light shining down on the Baroque Moszna castle before me. Its ninety-nine spires attempting to rip the moon apart. I smirk. Home is where the heart is. It’s been a long time coming. But I’m ready. Paragraph 1 This […]
#25 City of Dreams
Hello everybody, today we have a science-fiction piece from Joe Nelson on writing.com. Profanity is included in the extended piece, so proceed with caution. Paragraph 1&2 (combined because paragraph one is all of one sentence.) Nexus City stood on the edge of the world. For those with the units, it was a gateway to the […]
Review #3 Massachusetts
blog #24 Mercy
Today we have a piece titled ‘Mercy’ by Raygunner on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 ‘Not a lapdog but does a lot of it,’ is how the bulletin board post read. My family had been looking for a dog for some time and my mother found this post on an old-style pin-up bulletin board where she worked. […]
#23 Aunt Rosie’s Flower Stand
Hello everybody, today we have a fantasy piece titled ‘Aunt Rosie’s special flower’ from Joto-Kai on Writing.com. Pargraph 1&2 (combined because first paragraph was a single sentence.) The lines on the deserted country road had long since washed away. Leery of committing and getting stuck in the mud shoulder and uncertain if I should even […]
Review #2 Sunwielder
#22 Phantasy Perspective
Today we have a piece titled Phantasy Perspective by Wizard on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 Outside, the thunder’s defining roar can be heard forcing the sea to submit to its overbearing might, the rain too can be seen flailing in panic, as if each individual drop were cowering from thunder’s tyranny, and lightning’s world blinding wrath. […]
#21 Dark Realm
Greetings, today we have a piece from Amoternus on Deviant art titled Dark Realm. Paragraph 1 Luminos runs through the hospital, ignoring the men and women going about their business. He had no time for them today. He had to escape the two men chasing him. He slips around the carts full of medicine and […]
Miscellaneous #1 SHENANIGANS
Just a video with my brother, myself and a few other noble personages messing around with the sound equipment for our reviews.