#16 Caffadel’s Cure

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Salutations all you neurotic newts, today we have a piece from Slam on Writing.com titled Caffadel’s Cure. Paragraph 1 I was walking westward on a dirt road. It was a densely forested area, I couldn’t see beyond the trees. I looked ahead, the road was going up a small hill. I walked towards the hill […]

#15 Lord of the Abyss

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Blog 15 Greeting you myopic monsoons, today we have a piece from Irjikor on DeviantArt. Where to start…? Gods, where to start? Haha… Gods… Puny things… I have seen them pray to more gods than there are people on this world. And what do they do? Nothing! Every so-called god is nothing more than a […]

#14 The Vampire’s Path

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Blog 14 Greetings all you geriatric gulags, today we have a fantasy piece titled The Vampire’s Path from DemiTheVampireKing on Deviantart. Paragraph 1 The Dominican plane, realm of Vampire creation. A beautiful land of blood and gore. My home lands, and the reason I left it, we will get to.  Ah, there’s young me. My […]

#13 Hey, Gary

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Greetings all you fickle fiddles, today we have an offering from Whitemorn on Writing.com titled ‘Hey Gary,’ and it promises horror. “Hey Gary look … a haunted house! Let’s go check it out!”Dropping their Stingray bikes to the ground excitedly, the two rambunctious seven year olds crept through the high grasses and under the ancient […]

#12 Fox on the Run

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Greetings, you barbarous bullions, today we have a sacrifice from Candid Ishida on Writing.com involving canine reprobates of the worst sort, foxes. This is the first chapter of a story titled Fox on the Run, and will no doubt include much furred skullduggery. Paragraph 1 When Penelope pulled into her driveway, the fox was already […]

#11 Out of the Blue

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Blog 11 Hello, you wonderful wombats, today we have a fantasy piece from A.E.Willcox and, per her request, we have altered the characters’ names for their safety. I assume they are involved in high-level interdimensional espionage and shenanigans, and we will treat their sacrifice with the utter seriousness and honor it deserves. Super-Secret Paragraph 1  The […]

Blog 10: Sacred Rite

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Hello all you bewildering wildebeests, today we have a piece from K.L Randolph on Wrting.com. Paragraph 1 It was a darkly lit room. Cold and damp from the water seeping through the cobbled floor and walls. It was a circular room with a stone table in the middle and four high backed chairs carved out […]

#9 The Amount of Red Tape is Baffling

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Greetings all you wrathful wombats, today we have a supernatural piece from Loreli on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 “There is some mistake.” Nicole protested as she was stuffed into a police car, hands secured behind her back with a pair of thick metal handcuffs.  First off, a quick grammar fix. When dialogue is introduced or ensued […]

#8 Please, Don’t Move

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Greetings, you phenomenal poltroons, today we have a piece from Johnny on Writing.com Paragraph 1 Mark, a young man with black hair and striking, blue eyes tapped away at a computer, the only beacon of light in a room surrounded by shadows. The bags underneath his eyes indicated his growing exhaustion, but he tapped on, […]

#7 And Fernando Makes Three

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Paragraph 1 Sunshine peeped through the parting clouds as Levi latched the metal gate behind him and rambled up the cobblestone pathway. His mind drifted back to the afternoon he had left the house, full of bitterness; vowing never to return, but his anger was now well and truly spent. This was no time for […]

#6 Into the Cave

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Greetings, all you glorious reprobates. Today we are deconstructing a fantasy piece titled Into the Cave by Kirby Ray on Writing.com. I am assuming (reprehensible I know) that it will contain a rather dark and dank structure of natural composition. Paragraph 1 Everything felt surreal after the declaration of war: all over the city of […]

#5 Audio-visual Communication

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Salutations, you fabulous individuals! Today we have a science-fiction piece by Ezekiel Stephens on Writing.com titled Audio-Visual communication. Paragraph 1 Calibri gazed over hundreds of faces. This was his job – monitoring faces for the government. Row upon row of screens displaying beautiful images of people. The mouths of the faces opened and closed. A […]

#4 Chasing Stars

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Today we have a sacrifice from J.M.Robinson, an author whose books tend to feature strong female leads, romance, magic, and action. I have several of her books and this is a short story tilted Chasing Stars. Paragraph 1 Jessica pressed her palm against the glass, heat fogging around her hand. Cold. Wet. Rain patteredoutside, slicking […]

#3

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Today we have a sacrifice from Christopher Keene, a chapter from a future, currently nameless book. He is a fantasy/science-fiction author with a book series involving a rather lethal species of trees. Paragraph 1, sentence 1&2. I strolled through my suburban neighborhood, its streets deserted with Saturday night curfew in full effect. Although anxious to […]

# 2 Squib

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Greetings, all you lovely people. Today we’re deconstructing an episodic fantasy piece written by ButonFly on Minds. This first episode is titled Squib. Paragraph 1 The gates of Silkwood were tall and heavy, made of thick branchless logs harvested from the very swamp in which they stood, watched closely by a loose guard of men […]