Blog 70: Twigs

Blog 70 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled Twigs by Annette on Writing.com. (Warning: mentions of mature content. Mild but present.)       Paragraph 1 The inside walls of the tent reflected the bioluminescence emanating off the elven couple after their lovemaking. Pyria and Rogor lay next to each other holding hands […]

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Blog 69: The Sacrifice

Blog 69 Hello everybody, today we have a piece from GaelicQueen on Writing.com title The Sacrifice.       Paragraph 1 I listened to the heavy footfalls of the Roman patrol as I hid beneath the cover of an old log and ferns. I held my breath waiting for them to pass.   Thematically/theoretically, this […]

Blog 68: A Petulant Life

Blog 68 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled A Petulant Life by Chasing Grace on Writing.com.       Paragraph 1 The room poorly lit, the air stale and at moments, stifling. A woman of advanced years reclines on the bed, laying beneath a heavy comforter. Despite the warmth of the room her […]

Blog 67: The Wisconsin Encounter, Part 1

Blog 67 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled Wisconsin Encounter Part 1 by E-Memes on Writing.com.         Paragraph 1 December 7th, 1997, Rural Wisconsin. It was the early morning, around 3 AM and nothing out of the usual. A few State Police patrolling around the town. The Diner, called Minnie’s […]

Blog #68: A Petulant Life

Blog 68 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled A Petulant Life by Chasing Grace on Writing.com.       Paragraph 1 The room poorly lit, the air stale and at moments, stifling. A woman of advanced years reclines on the bed, laying beneath a heavy comforter. Despite the warmth of the room her […]

Blog 67: Wisconsin Encounter part 1

Blog 67 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled Wisconsin Encounter Part 1 by E-Memes on Writing.com. Paragraph 1 December 7th, 1997, Rural Wisconsin. It was the early morning, around 3 AM and nothing out of the usual. A few State Police patrolling around the town. The Diner, called Minnie’s was open with a […]

Blog 66: Break the Chains

Blog 66 Hello everybody, today we have a sci-fi dystopian piece titled March 1st 2059 by Lorenisoneofmynames from Writing.com.       Paragraph 1   February 1st, 2056           My bare feet slap the street as I run, little pebbles and jagged bits of trash slicing into the flesh. Why am I […]

Blog 65: Break The Chains

Blog 65 Hello everybody, today we have a piece tilted Break the Chains by T.A.Brooks on Writing.Com.       Paragraph 1 (ish) Year 736         A new day. A fake sun shining through worn and tattered curtains to wake the siblings sleeping in creaky beds under musky blankets and on old pillows. […]

Blog 64: A New Dawn

Blog 64 Hello everybody, today we have a piece from Zachary Wright on Writing.com titled A New Dawn.     My brother and I are twins, I believe my name should have been his. As infants we were found by a deity named Halogi or The High Flame. Growing up we found out we had […]

Blog 63: The Abott Hotel

Blog 63 Hello everybody, today we have a piece titled The Abott Hotel by Violet on writing.com. Paragraph 1 My name is Tatiana, and I work as a receptionist at The Abbott Hotel. It was founded a few hundred years ago and remains one of the oldest operating hotels in the country, though you won’t find it […]

Blog #62: Peepshow

Blog 62 Hello everybody, today we have a repeat offender with Andrea Craig and her piece Peepshow.     Paragraph 1 After the end of a long day in the San Aguado summer heat, the working men and women of Ridgeback liked nothing more than to spend their evenings in the various air-conditioned establishments all […]