#4 Chasing Stars

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Today we have a sacrifice from J.M.Robinson, an author whose books tend to feature strong female leads, romance, magic, and action. I have several of her books and this is a short story tilted Chasing Stars. Paragraph 1 Jessica pressed her palm against the glass, heat fogging around her hand. Cold. Wet. Rain patteredoutside, slicking […]

#3

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Today we have a sacrifice from Christopher Keene, a chapter from a future, currently nameless book. He is a fantasy/science-fiction author with a book series involving a rather lethal species of trees. Paragraph 1, sentence 1&2. I strolled through my suburban neighborhood, its streets deserted with Saturday night curfew in full effect. Although anxious to […]

# 2 Squib

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Greetings, all you lovely people. Today we’re deconstructing an episodic fantasy piece written by ButonFly on Minds. This first episode is titled Squib. Paragraph 1 The gates of Silkwood were tall and heavy, made of thick branchless logs harvested from the very swamp in which they stood, watched closely by a loose guard of men […]

#1

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Hello, all you wonderful people; Today I am editing one of my brother’s older works, mostly due to lack of material, but also because I believe there is merit to dissecting one’s own work. This is a novella cautiously titled “The Questionable Wisdom of Sages” and is intended as a comedy with light adventure elements. […]